Friday 22 February 2019

The story about The Mine's Afire!



This is my comprehension about the mines afire.
By LeBron.

2 comments:

  1. Ki Ora LeBron great blog post.

    I really like the way you put in heaps of information about the mine.
    But maybe next time you could add more colour in to make it look better.

    Great job from Oliver.

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  2. Hey LeBron!
    Thank you for sharing your work. Are you enjoying the novel? I think it is really sad how so many children were left fatherless. Are you looking forward to going out to the Mine Site? I sure am as I love going outside of the classroom to learn new things.
    Keep up the hard work.
    Miss H

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